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The Perfect Storm

The Perfect Storm

A Poem by Laz K.

for jaded eyes sick of seeing blue

a strange, red sky burns with

the promise of something new

 

flaming tongues tickle and tease

till reason trips and falls

feeling weak in the knees

 

she’ll rob you blind with a kiss

should you trade your peace

for a moment’s infernal bliss

© 2021 Laz K.


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New brings excitement, a challenge that the days passed have dulled In to more of the same background music when your mind craves the chaos and vibrancy of new. And then just await the title to appear and see what one wins, new or old. Please let it be new 😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

"your mind craves the chaos and vibrancy of new"
You hit the nail on the head with this!
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Most of my life, I've drifted thru various situations & locations becuz of my need to try something new. So I very much relate to this. The excitement of newness is better than a new lover (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Months Ago


Love is the most dangerous drug known to man. It is more seductive than cocaine, more addictive than heroin, and will leave you wrecked, crashed on some foreign shore. Your words remind me of what a devastating force this can be. I love it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

I agree with your diagnosis.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
dear Laz... since my Father's family was from Hungary...
I am fascinated by your poem. My grandfather and his
two sons-- my Father and his brother... were Cobblers in Hungary.
They came with their entire family to Ellis Island and were
directed to West Virginia where they set up Shoe Shops to
repair Shoes as they did in the olde Country. truly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Change is exciting , frightening at the same time . Yet venturing out from these dulled days is a better deal for me . Nice Poem Laz ! Liked it alot
Love
Kathy

Posted 2 Months Ago


This is a really beautiful write

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

Thank you!
Pleasure is very tempting, even to those who pride themselves on their rationality. But who among us has not given in to passion at some time or another? Instead of flagellating ourselves, though, the best course is to count the slip as a learning device and try to avoid repetitions in the future (even though we probably won't).

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

Very well said. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
New brings excitement, a challenge that the days passed have dulled In to more of the same background music when your mind craves the chaos and vibrancy of new. And then just await the title to appear and see what one wins, new or old. Please let it be new 😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

"your mind craves the chaos and vibrancy of new"
You hit the nail on the head with this!
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A red sky....the color of passion and desire. Not sure one is trading peace for a moment of bliss when a romance begins, but I enjoyed the way you expressed yourself here. Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


Laz K.

2 Months Ago

"Not sure one is trading peace for a moment of bliss when a romance begins"
My friends Romeo,.. read more
Red for passion. A fiery and heated write. The promise of something new is much preferable to singing the blues. Very nicely composed Laz.

Chris


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Laz K.

2 Months Ago

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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Laz K.
Laz K.

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