As Long As He Stays

My very worst side,
He's seen it all,
But he'll still be there..
He'll catch me when I fall.

I'll break down and cry,
He'll hold me in his arms,
Love me regardless,
Protect me from harm.

He knows all of me,
Every single part,
He's seen my very worst,
But he'll still be my heart...

He'll always kiss my tears,
Say "Baby it's okay",
And it actually will be,
As long as he stays...

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Oh, how beautifully bittersweet... Made me think about how wondrous it is to have someone in your life who has seen the bad and loves you even more deeply. To share a love like that can turn the worst of days into a wonderland for two. May he stay and may you both grow ever stronger!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Awwww, thanks so much! (: it is amazing knowing that you have that one person who will always be there for you no matter how terrible you act, and will always forgive you. He can definitely turn my day around(: once again, thanks for the review!

[Jordan's Back]

True love Doesn't see the worst when it rears its ugly head, all it sees is the object of affection :) This is a wonderful expression :)

[Lover Of Words]

Beautiful peice..

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you!

[Erinne S.]

This piece sounds similar to the relationship between my fiance and me. I don't know where I'd be without him.

You did a very good job with this piece! In the third stanza (first 2 lines) your flow breaks a little in my opinion from the rest of the piece. I don't know if you'd like to reword it a little bit or just keep it (It's your work to write as you please!) Anyway, that is just one small suggestion from me.

All around it was a wonderful piece and you did a fantastic job :)

~Erinne

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you, I'll think about how to change it(: