I Can Finally Be Me

I Can Finally Be Me

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just some thoughts expressed in poetry.. This was kinda my thinking process, I was thinking about how I'm not good enough, but then I realized I'm getting better. Well, I hope you enjoy (:

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I'm sorry I can't be perfect,
Extremely skinny and pretty,
That's what people want,
But it's quite hard to achieve.

I've always struggled with,
Loving myself, how I look,
So many insults and rumors,
My confidence, they took.

I was left kind of broken,
My reflection hated me,
But now the love of my life,
Is beginning to set me free.

I've gotten a little more confident.
In myself, I've begun to believe,
I've stood tall against the insults,
And now I can finally be me.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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Being you is being free, from any negativity.. It will always come your way, try to keep you dull and grey.. but Amanda you know you're brighter than a rainbow.. so shine your true colors girl, be vibrant, cause Amanda you add color to this darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Keegan! I know I've been off for awhile, but this was a great review to come back.. read more



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Very nice poem indeed. :) no matter what someone else sees as long as your happy with yourself then that's all that matters. The lover loves you for you :) never forget it! Good job once again. And don't let those words get to you. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Aw, thanks so much (:
Edward

7 Years Ago

No problem
I know the feeling. a good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
:) I know that feeling :/ unfortuently... I'm glad you're overcoming it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Yes, I am, thankfully (: I'm sorry that you've had to go through this feeling though, it really isn'.. read more
Lozzie

7 Years Ago

no it isn't but red hair and glasses gets you that :P and i knwo its corney but without bullying i .. read more
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Hahahha, sometimes you get the best things in the weirdest ways, oh well. At least you have them (:
Great poem! I am sure a lot of people can relate to this. The last stanza is my favorite. :) "I've stood tall against the insults..." Beautiful. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
Nice poem! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
The Invisible Girl

7 Years Ago

Your welcome! :)

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Amandaaa Caroline (:

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