Without a Sound

I'm sorry guys.. I'm still a mess. I guess y'all will just have to put up with me until I'm done venting through poetry :P I have more questions than answers, and writing helps me think. So, thanks (:

Those adorable little messages,
That immediately brought a smile,
The sound of his sweet voice,
That left me blushing for awhile...

Today's our eleven month,
Supposed to be special and happy,
He hasn't talked to me though,
So instead I'm sad and lonely.

Yeah, cute guys flirt sometimes,
But they don't matter to me,
I hardly notice them,
With him, is all I want to be.

I'm still extremely confused,
I call him my rock, but he's gone,
Not permanently, hopefully,
But... What exactly is going on?

What should I think?
Did I do something wrong?
I feel like I messed up a lot,
I don't even feel like I belong.

Can I just have some answers?
That's all I ask for, please...
I just don't know what I did,
Why is this happening to me?

Why can't love be perfect?
It's the biggest mystery of all,
Love is an uncharted territory,
And it's usually where I fall.

It's not that I don't know how,
It's just that I make mistakes,
So many mistakes cause problems,
And problems lead to heartbreak.

I want to pull out of this though,
I'm tired of losing ones I love,
A lot of them are my fault,
But when did push come to shove?

I have so many questions,
Answers are nowhere to be found,
Kind of like my love...
Who vanished without a sound.

Reviews

[Rahul]

This write could be a great write, i think it's a great song. I liked this big write... your efforts, your emotions, your truth as well as lie and your weakness as well as your strength .. all you've dropped in this piece. Nice work once again as usual :) 100/100.

[krish]

nice......AMANDAAA.....i really liked = loved.....as i usually do..
but this time after read out ur poem...i was lost means totally lost in ur poem....
but i was still thinking that when u were writting this poem..,,what were on/in ur's mind..................................???????
i wanna giive u...89/100....

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks. And I have no idea what's going on, thats the whole entire point of the poem..

[krish]

ok....i understood...but for my convience....can u give me a brief of the poem......?

[Sheila Kline]

Love will never be perfect because we are not perfect. We are capable of causing great joy as well as great pain. When one has a broken heart, there is never a quick fix, and it takes time to heal. Do not be hard on yourself! The answers you seek will come with time!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Yes, I know, thank you!

[DIVYA]

Life is a long winding pathway marked by such rocks...each is a milestone...of greater maturity in us...Amanda, you are a great writer. Keep penning...and sharing!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you (:

[MandaBear]

Awww. If you ever need someone to talk to I am here! Sometimes when you experience heartache it is just making room for a stronger and better love to come!

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank youu.

[Baby Ricochet]

Loss and heartache are part of life and anyone who tries to tell you different is lying. I know that insight isn't going to make you feel better because in this moment nothing is going to make you feel better except the love of the guy you lost. Life is full of disasters

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Gosh, that's so true :/ but thank you anyways, your insight wasn't THAT bad, honestly, haha, I'm okay, kinda.

[Be myself!]

I like it. I can relate. If you ever need a friend to vent to then message me.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thank you, that's sweet of you, I may take you up on that.

[Be myself!]

Anytime. All my friends do it. It doesn't bother me. It actually helps me evade my own problems and mistakes.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, that's how I feel. I'm usually the one out of all my friends who listens to everyone's problems.. But then no one wants to listen to mine. So thank you (:

[Be myself!]

Your welcome. :)

[Annabelle Lee]

tear.
Im eorry. It will gt better.

[Annabelle Lee]

sorry
gt

[Annabelle Lee]

get

d****t.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Hahaha, I knew what you meant, but thank you.

[Annabelle Lee]

sure thing.

[Ahmad Cox]

Aww hug. I am sorry to hear. Thanks for posting such an honest poem. I hope you find your answers soon.

[Amandaaa Caroline (:]

Thanks Ahmad!