~Sunrise~

~Sunrise~

A Chapter by Ami N.

Warmth envelops all

The flower arches its neck

As the sun peeks out~



© 2012 Ami N.


Author's Note

Ami N.
I thought this was a beautiful picture, so I wrote a haiku to describe it :)
Does anyone know how to shrink the size of the picture?

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I just have to say; I laughed really hard at Dragon's comment. Her humor is unmatchable.

Gives a fairy-tale feel. You gave all these "humanistic" attributes to nature. "Enveloping".. perhaps something to do with arms? "Arches its neck" speaks for itself... "peeks". My favorite had to be the last line.

Great haiku.
So light and cheery....

The first line for some reason stood out to me.
I'm not sure why.

Not in a particularly positive way...

*95*

Posted 12 Years Ago


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AK
Wow! It is awesome! The picture compliments the haiku very well

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nope! I'm afraid I don't know how to shrink it. :/ Well, I suppose you...

Nope. XD

I really like the idea of you compiling all these haikus. A light, enjoyable read with a lovely picture associated with it.


Have you ever nibbled on flower petals?


Of course, dragons have amazing digestive systems, so I can eat whole rose bushes without a scratch in my insides.

I don't eat them though. I prefer maidens. With lots of jewelery.

o3o *100*.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ohhhhh this is so beautiful.
Love the pic and the color of the text is just perfect

Posted 12 Years Ago



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