~Sunrise~

~Sunrise~

A Chapter by Ami N.

Warmth envelops all

The flower arches its neck

As the sun peeks out~



© 2012 Ami N.


Author's Note

Ami N.
I thought this was a beautiful picture, so I wrote a haiku to describe it :)
Does anyone know how to shrink the size of the picture?

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I wish I could go watch a sunrise after reading this. I think you did well to put words to the picture in such a short space. Beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Summarizes the morning. Well done. And my sister was telling me you freaked out when I reviewed your work last time because I changed my name into Abigail. Just visit my profile so you won't get freaked out again :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


The picture and the haiku complement each other perfectly.
A very well worded haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aw, another beautiful haiku. Can I be inside that picture now?

Posted 11 Years Ago


wow i think it is beautiful also. very nice haiku and picture.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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PJ
How do you put pictures on your poem type thingy like that?
Very beautiful btw :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was awesome and so describing.
I have really enjoyed reading it and others as well :)

Yea, you can shrink it in an indirect way, by opening the photo through 'paint' before uploading it, and shrinking its size there. and then you can upload it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This makes me feel warm just reading it. Its as if the sun is right here in the room with me. Oh wait. That really is the sun. Looks like the clouds parted and the sun's warmth is enveloping me. *giggles to self*. This was really nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really beautiful. Amrah, you are a master, really. I love how much you can capture in such few words.
The lines are so melancholy; it reminds me of what happened last summer. With my two cousins. This really describes the feeling. *sniffles* I'm so proud of you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love the picture and the poem is so beautiful. XD

Posted 12 Years Ago



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