Teardrops (Acrostic)

A feeling that's too familiar...

These days, I often experience moments when

Everything around seems insipid, meaningless

And intense emotions overpower my being

Reaching out to your memories, I try to cope

Such are the times when the teardrops flow

 

Reviews

[Brandon]

I feel bad for people who the only comfort comes from memories. I understand because I too look back, and then my tears also begin to flow. If only I knew why. I wish, when I think about the way it should have been, or the way that it was, that it was different. Then the tears stop flowing, and I look at the world in a new way. Great write, and take care.

~Brandon~

[Lau Thiam Kok]

Beautiful indeed and the entire piece flows so smoothly.
"Such are the times when the teardrops flow" - is a beautiful line.
thank you.

[Rain]

I'm not familiar with this genre, but I like it. Rain..

[Valentine]

Memories are one gift from God that death cannot destroy..God bless...Valentine

[Serendipity]

Beautiful.

You always know the words to say to make my heart break. "Such are the times when the teardrops flow." Why don't you just tear my heart out and get it over with. But even if you do, that would not end the pain. Because without you I am lost, and every moment, "seems insipid, meaningless."

[Carole]

And, what a cleansing they are? I have cried more tears in my life time than I care to mention, but always feel better afterwards.

This is a poem many can relate to. Those days when you have momentary feelings of "going through the motions" and wondering if it is making a difference??

So few words and yet powerfully arranged! Well done, my friend!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This one is sad :(
deep and intense, but most of all..its a damn emotional piece and it's just like your pain is overflowing and finally came up with the tears...
Beautiful indeed!

[Aries]

Very intense and emotional...Overwhelming pain is very apparent here...

Short but Powerful....

Great Writing~