flowers for you

a write for my sweetheart for this valentine ..

soft, gentle and of scarlet hue,
kissing in white morning dew,
my red roses are here for you.

these rose petals carry my love scent,
so that you know, we are meant
for the future and the present.

embrace and wear these flowers,
let's dance in a land of ours,
for hours and hours.

I say this, with an open-heart,
you beat within my every part,
breathing life into my art.

- AH, 02/15/2025

Reviews

[Beren]

Ah this is so great again my friend!
Sweet, warm, full of love.
“ breathing life into my art.”
Love really does these things, right? They are muse.

And the second part is actually pretty genius I think, you know that person will be there…
Loved it. Hope you always feel that way. Also this reminded me the song “Pancakes for Dinner” by Lizzy McAlpine.

[A.H.]

That's such a sweet review. yes, love does these things :) they are the muse.

Nice song “Pancakes for Dinner”, heard it now.. lyrics are beautiful, perfectly describes the feelings..
"I wanna eat pancakes for dinner
I wanna get stuck in your head
I wanna watch a TV show together and when
We’re under the weather we can watch it in bed"

Thank you for reading this poem and this review, my friend. Appreciate it very!

[Beren]

I only comment on your poems with the excuse of recommending songs. since you don't send me your playlist link... haha (jk for sure)

[A.H.]

haha, poetry and music go together. don't they? keep the song recommendations coming .. :)
lol, the playlist link, good joke, hehe .. I'm still laughing hard.

[Beren]

do you remember when i was mad at you for your "what would i do" poem? this will turn into that too. good luck with me

[A.H.]

haha, I remember that! yes, mam... (smiles) I got you :)

[Stella Armour]

A lovely tribute to your lady , red roses are the embodiment of given love tokens..

Stella

[A.H.]

Thank you Stella for this review. Appreciate it!

[Stella Armour]

Always welcome my friend

Stella

[The dark Hydra]

i dont want your stinking flowers they suck as much as this poem does

[A.H.]

okay, no worries! Thanks for stopping by and sharing your views. I appreciate it.

[Chris Shaw]

Endearing Valentine poem for your love. Very nicely penned AH with lovely description. Much enjoyed.

Chris

[A.H.]

Thank you so much Chris. So glad to hear you enjoyed the poem. Appreciate it!

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful nature poem. I love flowers really. Good colors

[A.H.]

Thank you my friend. I'm glad to hear your thoughts on this poem.

[John the Baptist]

Unity of theme, good rhyming. No woman could resist this one.

[A.H.]

Thank you John for this review, Appreciate it.

[Dara]

Simply beautiful! It seems your sweetheart is your muse. There is nothing better than to be inspired in such a way. I know she must have loved it.

[A.H.]

Thank you Dara. Yes, she loved it :) this poem, my valentine gift for her.

[Dylan Macadham]

a beautiful tribute to your muse AH :)

[A.H.]

Thank you Dylan :)