post-it note

post-it note

A Poem by deepblue04

The room is a mess,

Thanks to me,

I left it as it was,

I was unsure about it

© 2012 deepblue04

Author's Note

this is a poem that is meant to fit on a sticky note

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It's a fun little poem. Put the sticky-note on the computer or television screen, they'll get it for sure. Unless it's teenaged boys, in which case you should put it on the refrigerator. You might consider changing the last line so as to match more closely the first two. For example, 'For others to see', or 'I'm messy, you see'. Something like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago

It will fit on a sticky note.

Posted 10 Years Ago

There is so much boldness ,honesty i loved it because it shows us the writers of how creative one can be. Keep it up ...

Posted 10 Years Ago

Straightforward and simple; definitely will fit into a sticky note. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

really does fit in a sticky note

Posted 10 Years Ago

Pretty straight forward, and it sure as hell would fit on to a sticky note. Lol. It's good.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Oh. Literally pretty straight forward. Not what I expected. It seems unemotive. I'd try just 2 lines. Keep the first, but the 2nd could be 'cuz of her bloody body' I guess I like to be sinister in my work!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Really good.....Needs marketing don't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago

Short, yet it doesn't need to be longer. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Would fit on a sticky note. Few words and to the point. A excellent poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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13 Reviews
Added on June 26, 2012
Last Updated on June 26, 2012



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