Time Ago

When a young man I so loved you With heart and soul both bold and true

When a young man I so loved you with heart and soul both bold yet true The fates have come between us both though my feelings still speak of you   This was a love without a ring instead kept by the heart and kiss That also didn't fall with time nor with the childish loss of bliss   When love is tethered to the heart possessed of happy devotion The passing years will never dull the height nor depth of that ocean   So it was as it should have been this love bound only in spirit Would not be shed of by the grave nor by those who failed to hear it

Author's Note

Life the timeless healer has once again conquered all. As what was once a torrid tempest has become a minute squall. The Light that burns twice as bright lasts half as long!

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So profoundly beautiful, expressed through the misted windows of time. You create such a longing for what was.. a reflection of love and life gone before... There is a rich depth in your words that connect us with such emotion. Wonderful write...truly.

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

So Beautiful and heart felt a true Romantic like me even though i am married this is how i feel most be on love two Spirits being Bonded and i dont feel we can live with out love we all need it and to know that some one cares. This made me Teary and touched my Heart very Beautiful Indeed My friend Thank you for sharing

[Lilly]

another very beautiful, heart felt piece
incredible...

[QuietPoet]

Very beautiful and different. Wonderful write.

[Faelyn ó Cuilinn]

Ghabh tú emotion fíor an méid sin. Theastaigh liom go caoin. Rinne sé dom a bhaineann le roinnt rudaí ar siúl liom nó a tharla. Bhí sé sin dán gluaiseacht le focail mhór agus álainn mothúcháin. Grá liom é!

Faelyn

[Tina Kline]

Very heart felt, deep and profound.
Lots of emotion in this one.

[The Analog Kid]

Beautifully written: "When love is tethered to the heart/Possessed of happy devotion."

Pat

[MusicJunkie66]

that was absolutely beautiful!!! It had a lot of depth and meaning to it.

[Bette]

beautiful

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

True romance , this remind me it still lives it is lovely.

[just rose.]

Here is my favorite line: "The soul with depth of an ocean."
This reminds me a bit of Byron, and some of his odes to loves lost.