Worthy of My Friends

Through path and switch with company skipping along the winding road I pass food and accompany with he whom life seldom bestowed

Dave and Jason

To walk the roads of soul strewn streets

with all thoughts we know of living

Leaves us lonesome for others feats

finds sharing to come from giving

 

Through path with switch and company

skipping along the winding road

I pass food and accompany

with he whom life seldom bestowed

 

In those who share my few comforts

won't you join me in life's amends

For as long as I walk this earth

may I be worthy of my friends

Reviews

[Emily]

Great, well structured piece, with a fantastic meaning. nicely done.

[ashley]

this is a beautiful poem with a beautiful message. :D

[LadyNaida]

It's so hard to find a friend whom one can trust and get along with. If we do find that one friend that totally has your back and understands you...than you found that one friend you can say I am worthy of having.

[Liza]

this was a soothing and comforting write
i have always believed to have friends we must be a friend

[LeaMarie]

I love the sentiment in this poem. Anyone who helps another is a friend.

[Jae]

Its so amazing. I love it.

[Austin Smith]

A great message bestowed upon us in much fewer words than most of your other poems. I see you're still going strong after all this time. Until your flame goes out, keep it up.

[Havatara]

It's a lovely poem. I liked the lines: Leaves us lonesome for others feats / finds sharing to be in giving. Good work.

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

A beautiful poem about friendship and a wonderful tribute indeed.... Thanks for entering the contest.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

thoughtful~ lovely inspirationa piece~