I Wish

Michael and Payton

This picture taken by my daughter days before Michael passed into our eternal memories. On that day the heart of The Almighty broke! The skies opened and even Heaven cried.

"Daddy I want to be a poet”

"Just a poet then?"

"Not just a poet!"

"A Great POET!"

 

 

 

Softened by times consummate plush,
How sleek the woe appears
That threatened childhoods citadel
And undermined the years
Bisected now by bleaker griefs,
We envy the despair
That devastated childhood's realm,
So easy to repair

Emily Dickinson

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Author's Note

Who among us has not tasted the bitterness of disappointment? Perhaps in the dreams of a child hope springs eternal!

Reviews

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Tate,

"Just a poet then?"

Boy, you make the heart of a dreamer proclaim his/her dreams, don't you.

None of us want to be "Just a poet...". We all want to be a great poet. I would be a liar if I said I strived for less. I want my career summary to read: Great scientist, great business man, great lover, great friend, great philosopher, great poet. Who doesn't?!! Indeed, I am consumed by this. It is what drives me every day. I won't achieve all of these goals, I know. Who can? Only the very rare, but do I desire and dare to be the very rare? Yes I do. I have to try even though I know I will only make it so far, and that all the deeds that I may achieve are only transitory, the stuff on a hundred years if I'm lucky. So why the fuss? I don't really know. It is programed into me, I guess, but that is who I am, and that for which I strive. Always a work in progress, trying to be better, until the final end, of course. Where will I go? What will I achieve? "Just a poet..."? Not if I can help it!

A short poem. A powerful poem. Words of the human soul from one so young. We are programed to strive and dream. And we dare to want our dreams to come true. This is probably the greatest attribute of the human soul.

Really high marks on this one, My Friend!

Very best regards,

Rick

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Awesome!!!

[Lovely Lady]

always thought provoking and endearing.
lovely lady

[Katrina Mckeown]

it's beautiful!, sorry taken so long to read, not been online for a very long time, hopefully read and review a lot more now, thanks for sharing Tate!

[TL Boehm]

Not just a poet....a great poet! True words...

[Bhavya Kaushik]

That was very personal. Reminded me of my childhood. Very, very emotional!

[msharma]

Dear poet
The thought penned as"just a poet" reflects the pain artistically woven into words, the work of a great poet indeed.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Ah, such passion is these "precious" words. The Picture, the music make this a powerful write without the need for many words.
If we could all see through the eye's of a child, so pure, and untainted; I believe this world would be a better place!
Your Author's note is very touching. ~ TY for sharing.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Beautifully expressed the vision. Good.

[lei]

a verse yet tells a whole story... nice

[WindSong]

You are a fine poet with great talent! Your work is profound and beautiful.

Best regards,

WindSong