Our Last Summer

Our Last Summer

A Poem by Luna

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Walking down the beach,
Hands touching,
Feet covered in sand,
The sunset turning the ocean shades of red,
Orange,
Yellow,
Your eyes the color of the sea shining.
Everyday we would do this,
Walk down the beach,
Wishing for the summer to never end,
My thin dress blowing against my body,
My bikini straps showing.
The striped blanket laid out in the cove,
Your arm wrapped around my waist.
Every day goes by,
Memories implanted in my mind
As we lay in the sand,
The sun bleaching our hair.

Our last walk,
Our last embrace,
And you leave me behind,
Walking up the beach alone,
Walking home
Where your girlfriend waits.

© 2010 Luna




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I think this was an awesome poem and good luck in my contest

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Posted 14 Years Ago


very good descriptive words, very beautiful but sad in the end. Well done. I liked it.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


Ah youth it has such rose colored glasses


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Posted 14 Years Ago


Throughout the entire poem you can feel the romance between the two... The end wraps it up with a twise, yet in the perfect way. I really liked this poem. Listen to music more often, maybe you will get more ideas like this

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Posted 14 Years Ago


oh i liked it a lot ;D

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Posted 14 Years Ago


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh that was sad because the girl was cheated on I like it how it flows I feel like im there.

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Posted 14 Years Ago


by the way i love the song our last summer from mama mia/abba, if that's what your'e referring to ;)

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Posted 14 Years Ago


A poem that flowed wonderfully with beautiful images that create wonderful moments as you described, but the ending was sad. Good job on this...

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Posted 14 Years Ago


A very amazing poem. It has a great description and some amazing word choice. Great job,

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Posted 14 Years Ago


the poem is really great. it flows smoothly and well written. i liked it! :)

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Luna
Luna

Civil War Capital, VA



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