Entrancing Pull

Watching from afar, observing feline eyes

The kind that pierce through the darkest of realms

Finding him wandering paths of dismal forestry

Lost in the decay of emotional turmoil

Raising his head, gazing in my direction

Penetrating my soul, freezing my breath

Smiling in a way that would greet a friend

Motioning me forward to join in his trudge

Slowly floating in the direction he occupies

With racing heart and mind entranced

Hypnotized by motives lingering in his heart

Curious of surroundings that seem to elude him

Fingers entwine mine with an encouraging tug

Eager to lead upon cobblestone devastation

Pulses of longing vibrate on my flesh

As I abide to the pull of his leading to nowhere

Frostbitten branches graze through his hair

Painted with blackness, shining like demon blood

Flying in the wind as it whispers in his ear

Guiding me to hellacious places unknown

Frightened at the lack of resistance, my lack of control

Allowing this stranger to kidnap independance

The force that drives me through the light living within

But shadows engulf me as he captures my morals

Loveless intentions forsaking me, deserting me

Leaving heels over head at the allure of this incubus

Carrying my spirit to a side of immortality

The sector of sleepless nights and bloodshed calamity

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Malister Mikey]

Really liked this poem it was a brilliant piece that captured my imagination and I felt like I was being under the control. Great work as always

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you very much :D

[Chris]

The draw of the "dark" is clear and compelling. I like the internal rhythm and the way it grasps the imagination.

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D

[Harmony-Lee]

Beautiful :-)
Magically inviting and Exciting.

[Briana O'Connor]

Thank you :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh how sweet, you wrote about our encounter, LOL… kidding…

A very sensually wicked poem… gotta love the allure vampires have. Just something special about the living dead.

[Briana O'Connor]

Lol Thank you :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are so very well.

[Steve L.]

Richly vivid and seductive poem. Well done!

[Briana O'Connor]

thank you :D