i dont know

if all the pieces of my heart

that i gave away

to the ones who didn't deserve

were conjoined

i wonder

how big they would amount to

if it would be

half of  my entire heart

if all the thoughts

i wasted

on the ones who weren't worth it

stood before me

piled together

to create a mountain

that would seem impossible to climb

if all the tears

that i shed 

over the ones didn't care

who couldn't manage

to stick around

i wonder if they would make an ocean

i fear

that they would

i wonder if there was a way i could take back the time that you stole

the years, days, and hours that you wasted

but i suppose the burden is on me

because it was i who choose to give it to you

Reviews

[Wandervogel]

wow.....what a great expression......kudos

[Jamsheed Shafi]

great lines.
pretty emotional.
yes, its a bitter truth almost everyone comes across once in life.
but there is hope and above all there is God.
i really liked it . it touched my heart.
keep writing friend.

[lifethroughwords]

thank you so much that genuinely means alot

[Parimal Pratyush]

Beneath the little grammatical errors, lies the heart and soul of a strong person. I really like the feel to it. SO much truth, honesty and passion in this. I love it.

[lifethroughwords]

wow I'm reading it over and your right i made so many grammatical errors, so embarrassing . But thank you so much that really means alot.

[lifethroughwords]

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