Reviewing A Work Well Done

who, what, when, where, why

Creator of the Universe

Gazes at the world laying at his fingertips

As all the angels watch in a hush

Lining the portals of Eternity

Waiting on his approving satisfaction

 

Author's Note

Creation being viewed by the Creator....not sure if I gave it my all....I think I want to try again....I don't think the title is good enough either.....

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

This was a very well thought out piece. Loved it.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

lol Pretty neat, I must say. ^^ It's short, sweet, and to the point. I think I have a story similar to this... but this one is more religious. :) It really would be quite the thought-provoking piece, depending on the reader, of course; many people wonder if He got the satisfaction He wanted. :P

Thanks for posting this. :D It was a lovely read.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[R J Askew]

I like this one a lot. when i read it I imagined God trying to write a poem to amuse himself, but he isn't happy with it and keeps screwing it up...he is up to his knees in balls of paper...the title of the poem?...let me look more closely over his shoulder...MAN

[Lady V]

This piece speaks truth that not everyone can handle. The title says it all. It was a work well done and there is no one who could do it better. This piece is short, sweet and to the point.

Good Job
Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[RHEA CROSLEY]

Very beautiful scene. I have had some experiences since my wife died and went with Jesus. I sometimes feel like I am yearning to be there. I have reasons to stay if God wills and I have reason to go if He wills. I am learning to be content in the circumstances that I have and celebrate life and creation as a gift.