What would she say?

What would she say?

A Poem by Laura E. Aranda
"

Let's be GrEeN together

"

What would Mother Earth say

If she came to us, in a crib she did lay

And as a child she did listen

Reading every untrue book the school's display

Her tears unseen, wet and glisten

Shaking her head at things in dismay

 

Now human, she sees it is 'we' who destroy

Her eyes take in all the schemes, and gimmericks so coy

While the sun peeked behind smoggy clouds so dim

Mother Earth focused on her eternal future so grim

As a youth she reiterated the hopes of a cleaner day

But the ones around her were breathing from lungs of gray

 

What can I do but accept what these creatures throw my way

Mother Earth faded back into the scenery and no one realized that she had went away

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Laura E. Aranda


Author's Note

Laura E. Aranda
Please don't litter
is the age old slogan but in this day and hour
Guys! We have to do something!

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This is a very meaningful poem, and most people forget that we really do need to love the Earth, it's been dealing with us selfish brats since the first day!

I'm doing a school project on going green, let's hope that with our combined efforts, we can save the world together, and restore it to what it once was!!!

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wonderful poem!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good piece. What we as humans are doing to the earth where we live and expect our children to inheirit. There might be just a wasteland when for our grandchildren. Your poem really drove that point home.


Now human, she sees it is 'we' who destroy

Her eyes take in all the schemes, and gimmericks so coy

While the sun peeked behind smoggy clouds so dim

Mother Earth focused on her eternal future so grim

As a youth she reiterated the hopes of a cleaner day

But the ones around her were breathing from lungs of gray



You did a great job with this poem.


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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The last two lines are heartbreaking. She fades away and we never even notice. I think such an attitude as that would be entirely possible in the world we live in.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very meaningful poem, and most people forget that we really do need to love the Earth, it's been dealing with us selfish brats since the first day!

I'm doing a school project on going green, let's hope that with our combined efforts, we can save the world together, and restore it to what it once was!!!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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