TIME

About time.

TIME,

And time again,

TIME,

You always win.

TIME,

You always lend,

TIME,

There is no end.

TIME,

I never heed,

TIME,

You took the lead.

TIME,

And now I cheer,

TIME,

You're finally here.

Reviews

[Wingless Fallen Angel]

This is a really good write. It has a nice flow and rhythm.

[Sourav]

Nice write! :)

[LunarSong]

Nice poem. I swear, time always does win.

[Matt Ritch]

Best poem I've ever read.

[BrinaMarie]

I love the repetitive tool you used. It really forces the mind to stop and go, almost like time itself. Very creative in its shortness as well.

[Farrsight]

You guys are so nice!

[Megara]

awesome poem!love the pic.

[Starscraper]

My mind cannot fathom how time can never have a beginning or an end. I just can't think about it because it freaks me out. I love the picture you put for this poem. It looks like time is running out through your fingers and you can never catch it again! This is a fabulous poem! Keep up the good work!

[AWickedMoon]

An awesome short poem! :)

[Calibaster]

That's awesome! why did you never show me this one before! Now I'm mad! Oh well, I'll stow it for a while to say, good job!!!!

[Farrsight]

FANKS! I prichate it!

[Calibaster]

yer weolllcume.

[Farrsight]

poooooooooooo!