Let me LIVE..!!!

Let me LIVE..!!!

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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A song lyric!

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LET ME LIVE...!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

And I just don't understand why,

You always wanna bring me down (down…down)

I just don't understand why,

You always bring me down!

(So put your hands up and...

Beat…beat…beat this ground)

 

 

I'm sick of being so secure,

And you still call me mature (huh!!)

I'm tired of being so bounded,

With morons I'm always surrounded!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

 

So why should I care for who you are,

I need not to walk in your shoes.

As I'll better hit you with this guitar,

 

I'm saying very respectfully,

To maintains a mile distance from me.

As it's the question of my dignity!!!

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic]

 

And I just can't stop making this sound!!

 

[Verbal Acoustic continues]

 

(And you are still unaware,

You're fake and not real.

I'm getting into this all alone,

You're already gone...so long!)

 

So!! Just let me LIVE….!!!

Let me LIVE..!!!!

 

 

Why can't you let me live,

I'm tired of being so sophisticated.

Of being so complicated.

Don't you have any business except watching me?

Because I'm always finding you around,

And I just wanna be me.

Else I would make this sound!

(sound..d..d…d..d..)

 

[Verbal Acoustic fades...]

 

 

 

© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik


Author's Note

Bhavya Kaushik
This again is a song lyric! and it's actually kind of pop, kind of rock and kind of punk..(kind of everything huh!!)
Writing this one was really..really damn easy!!

But, Singing this one was really damn hard for me...and I remember during the first rehearsal of this song, my thought got chocked..
So, right now we are going with even a back up singer for this one..
lolz..! :D
let it come man!!

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lol...if you put up song lyrics can you put up a link as well so we can listen to it?
it looks interesting
^-^
i am sure it would sound interesting too the rest of them as well...
looking forward to it
^-^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! great write and I agree that it's really quite easy for writers like you to write these kinds of song lyrics.
I will try to listen this one very soon in your voice( as i love it)
The feel and emotions also has been very well expressed in this write..
Awesome work sweetie! ^-^

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Very very nice! What song lyrics though? Will Say more in private. ~KA~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2008
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