Nothing but sad goodbyes...

Nothing but sad goodbyes...

A Poem by Bhavya Kaushik
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written for a contest :D

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Nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

There is nothing I could ever say,

Nothing I could do to make you stay.

And now my only wish is for you to see,

Of what will happen if you ever leave me…

 

I know I let you down but I won't do it again,

And I'm even ready to accept your every blame.

Stop now… forsake of the pain which I kept inside,

Forsake of the tears which I never cried.

 

 

But in spite of that you left with wet eyes,

And gave me nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

Without you, I don't know what will I do,

I will always remain incomplete without you.

Without you I can't breathe, without you I can't sleep,

And from my heart I will never ever let you leave.

 

You were my life and will always be,

As you know how much you mean to me.

You were the only one that I got right,

And you will always remain here inside.

 

 

But you left me with these tearful eyes,

And gave me nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Bhavya Kaushik


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You're one of the most talented writers on the site, Bhavya. You have done a superb job of of embracing the pain and memories accompanying the power of goodbye. Images associated with tears, loneliness and emptiness are strongly felt. Repetition, color change and photos add the finishing touch to this heartfelt work of art.
I hope you win the contest!!
XXX



Posted 15 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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I;m utterly blown away by this. Sorry it took me so long to review. I can agree with Apollonia that you are truly one of the most talented writers on this site. Hopefully you won the contest. Great write. =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


great poem. so do you still feel this way?

-mike kerr-

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really so sad, and beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love is such a powerful emotion. It is also fickle and fleeting, which makes me generally shy away from love poems. I know that is unfair.
Your love poems have a distinct style which makes it difficult not to like. You are very talented. Rain.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Awesome writing :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This left my eyes wet and I agree with Apollonia that you are truly one of the most talented writers present on this site.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I absolutely love this poem.
Great writer.Sweet write.

Awsome job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ha, wow, well you certainly know what its like to be left behind, as do I. May I say that you capture the emotion very well. I think you could sharpen the poem up by cutting out some words and keeping to the raw emotion of the piece. It really is a very nice piece,though.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Always enjoy reading your writings. They are so full of life with all of its promise and sorrows. Many of us can relate to how deeply you feel. The ones who can't put words to the way that they feel can read your poems and say yes that is where I am. Another great one by you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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