Nothing but sad goodbyes...

written for a contest :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

There is nothing I could ever say,

Nothing I could do to make you stay.

And now my only wish is for you to see,

Of what will happen if you ever leave me…

 

I know I let you down but I won't do it again,

And I'm even ready to accept your every blame.

Stop now… forsake of the pain which I kept inside,

Forsake of the tears which I never cried.

 

 

But in spite of that you left with wet eyes,

And gave me nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

Without you, I don't know what will I do,

I will always remain incomplete without you.

Without you I can't breathe, without you I can't sleep,

And from my heart I will never ever let you leave.

 

You were my life and will always be,

As you know how much you mean to me.

You were the only one that I got right,

And you will always remain here inside.

 

 

But you left me with these tearful eyes,

And gave me nothing but sad goodbyes…

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

You're one of the most talented writers on the site, Bhavya. You have done a superb job of of embracing the pain and memories accompanying the power of goodbye. Images associated with tears, loneliness and emptiness are strongly felt. Repetition, color change and photos add the finishing touch to this heartfelt work of art.
I hope you win the contest!!
XXX

[Lia]

Beautiful, heartbreaking piece. amazingly written x

[Blackbeats]

"Nothing but sad goodbyes" This is a masterpiece Bhavya, I wonder the amount of pain you have inside of your heart which results in such heart breaking poems.

[!!..Love..!!]

Bhavya, let me tell you this is extremely heart breaking and such a sad poetry. I do wonder why people leaves from our life, giving us nothing but a sad goodbye! Forcing us to live the rest of our life with those few memories. It really hurts.
"There is nothing I could ever say,
Nothing I could do to make you stay.
And now my only wish is for you to see,
Of what will happen if you ever leave me�"
This is really deep and personal, very emotional. You know you are now a master of writing heat breaking poems like this...No one can ever beat you and I'm sure you will come as a winner in that contest too!
Best wishes!

[Kevin Andros]

Well I know where she is now. Anyway, you are known to write sad poems and I am sure that you are going to win the first prize in this contest. Good luck. ~KA~

[Carole]

Awe Bhavya, this is so sad. Where is this girl? I will go get her for you myself! You have written a heart breaker here! She obviously made a lasting impression on you. I am sorry your relationship ended...

Great format-great delivery! XO Carole