I miss you mom!

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

 

 

 

I miss you mom…

 

I miss you mom, while walking alone in the rain,

I miss your tender touch mom.

But I know you'll never be back again.

 

 

I miss you mom, at every morning and at every night. 

I miss your lullaby and your bedtime stories. 

And now I'm searching just to get your one more sight.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, after returning from school to home, 

I miss your welcome and your smile. 

But now you're gone mom…so long.

 

 

  

I miss you mom, whenever I see my elder sister,  

Who is working so hard to get me well…  

Mom! See I'm even no longer your old prankster.

 

 

 

I miss you mom, so please come back soon. 

As here I want you to stay,

For twenty four hours a day 

I know this is really a hard time, 

And mom! I'm committing a crime, 

Of missing you so much tonight!

 

 

Author's Note

Ahmmm! I actually wrote this poem when I was either 13 or 14 :( :(


I was first confused while posting it here :(..So I asked my friends for their suggestions :)

So finally I came up with the decision that I'll keep it here :)

Reviews

[Carole]

Why would you remove it? Who says it doesn't meet WC standards? It is from your heart. That's what matters. Did your mom pass away or go some where? Motherhood is all of those things and more. No one sacrifices more-nurtures more-and cries more for her children or prays more, even when they are grown. :-) This would be perfect for Mother's day that is coming up!

Aww that was a sweet write... it was sad actually but still very expressive. I'm glad you kept it up here.

[TamiViolet]

My, as a mother myself, you certainly brought tears to my eyes. This is so beautiful. And you know what? It helped me
appreciate my son and how much he loves me. Love is something that I think we sometimes take for granted although
not intentional. I'm wondering what happened with your mom... Each time I read you, I want to read more... This one
is another favorite. You have a beautiful soul, my friend, so glad we met.

*hugs*

[Blue Rose]

Very much intriguing, I'm very sorry for you!

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this is great, i really really liked it

[D. L. Hutson]

Whatever reason behind you missing your mother, it's evident that it was painful not having her there. Believe me I know that feeling.
I grew up witout a mother, just recently we have been reconnected. That was beautiful what you wrote.

[Brianna Brie]

Well, I would have to say your talent is evident even at 13 or 14. Emotional and moving piece. When my son was born we were separated for 3 weeks and still to this day I see where it has affected him. Sorry for your loss.

[Brandon]

It was nicely done man, no need to remove it.

[The Outlaws' Song]

It's not about matching the standards!!! What standards anyway?! This poem is so strong and intense!!!!
It reflects the sincere and pure feelings/regrets/fears of a child.
So you definitely MUST keep this here.

Many many kudos and congrats.

[Haruki]

Please do not remove it. It is a beautiful poem and a reminder to all of us to cherish our mothers. Coming from a child's heart makes even more special.

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This is beautiful!! You should not not remove this. It was written from the heart. Very good.