You are still the one...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YOU ARE STILL THE ONE…

 

 

You were the one that I've always wanted,

We started it so well but it soon was ended.

 

Your love gave me hope and a new life to live,

I committed a mistake of loving you which I can't forgive.

 

 

For you I died every second with this frozen heart,

As you went with someone else and left me apart.

 

 

We started it so well but it soon was ended,

But you are still the one that I've always wanted...

 

 

Author's Note

:'(
(I clicked the second pic from the video of that song "Apologize" lolz.. :D :D )

Reviews

[Karl]

I loved the way you have arranged the first and last line.
Great work.

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I like your poem and how you structured the first and last stanzas to be mirrored...very well done!

[Together]

We always have someone special who will always remain that special even after passage of time, That idea has been presented beautifullly well in your poem Bravya.

[None]

Your poem says so much about love and the chance we take when we give our heart. I love the heart on ice picture with this. Your emotions and feelings come through so well on paper. Beautifully written!

[BeautyFromTheEarth93]

i like this poem a lot! some people love others so much, even when they don't love them back. "love is not a feeling, it is an ability." i really like this poem and i think you did a great job!!!!!

[Pj]

This is so sad...heart break sucks...but what a wonderful little piece :D

Nice job!

[indianhost]

i like your poem its show of a broking heart hope it ant yours if so hope its put back together soon hun

[!!..Love..!!]

I loved the usage of first and last line the most, there are few special people in our lives who always posses the same value...always! The poem describes the same feel I guess.
Very heart wrenching and sad!

[Blue Rose]

Oh my god! this is so beautiful. short but so powerful piece of writing!

[Blackbeats]

I think so anyone at writer's cafe could guess that its your work with the usage of apt pics and fonts...But besides that, even the feel and sorrow is so beautifully expressed