Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by bhavya

I see the entire cosmos in your eyes.
Isn't it beautiful
how your fragile existence resembles
a plethora of lucidity.
For everything I ever need to see,
I'd find it here
I'd find it in you.

© 2017 bhavya


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What a beautiful and romantic piece as you describe the power of the eyes and what they reveal.

Posted 3 Years Ago


When you find true love, what more do you need ?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, delicate and full of love.
Very nice.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very beautiful and calm. What nice piece you make it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely poetic poem. I look forward to reading more

Posted 4 Years Ago


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bhavya

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. :)
Very beautiful poesy! Every time I read it, it gets deeper and more lovely. Tyfs!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

4 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)
They say the eyes are the window of the soul. Beautiful piece. Short phrases that holds more meaning than a hundred long essays. Keep it up. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Beautiful. Amazing poem dear Poet. Thank you for sharing your words and thoughts. Loving and caring eyes. Can make us come alive again.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome Bhavya.
Succinct, eloquent and beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bhavya

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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bhavya
bhavya

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I have been writing ever since I was five. Have always wanted to portray thoughts, feelings and desires to the very extent possible using words. But human emotions are so much more then what words can.. more..

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