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Love Beneath the Moonlight...

Love Beneath the Moonlight...

A Poem by Brenda Sue

Our souls will make history
Your spirit draw thee sweet to me.  
I'll give to thee a lover's kiss,
Dancing beneath the moonlight's bliss.
 
'Neath the silvery paradise,
I'll taste your splendid spice,
Wrapped in the sweetest blanket,
Of a satin lover's sonnet.

Wrap tender songs about me;
Whisper words of sweet beauty.  
Show that you can't live without me
Like the blessed sky so misty.  

Cradle me in your strong embrace;
Caress thy trembling face with lace.  
Your love for me alone proclaim,
'Neath midnight stars aflame.

© 2008 Brenda Sue


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MAGNIFICENT! this is the most beautiful poem i have read in a while. it shows the true wanderings of a hopeless romantic! it is beautiful. the context is the longing that you are seeking forth, i hear it in the words you put so delicately. maybe even that you have found the kind of love in which i can only dream of. i am still lokking for that right one. but this is so beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Very beautiful and sensual piece of work here. This piece reminds me of a warm summer night with a lover under the moonlight. I can picture this in my head and it makes me smile to have the feeling of serenity as I read this.
Beautiful!
xoxo

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MAGNIFICENT! this is the most beautiful poem i have read in a while. it shows the true wanderings of a hopeless romantic! it is beautiful. the context is the longing that you are seeking forth, i hear it in the words you put so delicately. maybe even that you have found the kind of love in which i can only dream of. i am still lokking for that right one. but this is so beautiful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just closed my eyes after reading this and smiled while trying to recite some of the lines. This is pure beauty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So pretty.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet again. a fully rounded, complete poem
jaff

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely. This was just lovely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have managed to capture the magic of a moment here. The simplistic beauty of love is the greatest of all :)
Very nicely done!
Brian

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Magical, very Edwardian in style. The words flow well and fill the senses with images sublime. There is love behind the chosen words and depth of a bygone era...loved it!
Cheers,
Helen :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a beautiful structured poem - I believe they're called quatrains? the aa bb ryhme scheme is strongly handled in this one making it very lyrical, almost a vintage type poem. Awesome writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yep, beautiful; the language and sentiment. NH

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brenda Sue

Chatsworth, GA



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