Your Love Torture Me

too much emotions put in a poem..I am never good at poetry..ha ha Some thoughts just wanted to get out,so i let them out ,ha ha

 

You brought me to life,and what life

You showed me beauties,i longed to see

Tell me how you manage this ,i really lost my way

Is there no way out of you,you really trapped me in this

Tell me is your love was made to torment ,but love the way you do it

Please never stop..I like the way you torture me

You brought a new meaning to love,your words showed some new lives

Wonder how you do it..magician surely you are

You haunted me day and night..is there no way to cut you out

How sweet everything is about you,even with the pains and aches you bring

How you play with my heart ..but I feel it as the biggest pleasure I ever known

What are ,who are you,those words and thoughts shook my world,my whole being

Thoughts of you jump to my mind all the time..is just there no cure from you

 

Author's Note

no rules what so ever

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow... simply love the honesty in your emotions.. we are many things as people.. it's a daily struggle.. good and bad.. some people pull us like magnets and I have felt that affect a time or too. Part of being human is having so many emotions, feelings and beliefs.. we fall.. get up.. there are no rules when it comes to matters of the heart.. we can only feel what is true to us and our surroundings.. but still hold high a dream.. a fantasy.. a belief.. a love.. a passion.. you display you have lost your way.. many have.. I have more than once.. part of being human. Your surroundings displayed; through what you have written previously; shows it would be very easy to lose your way.. being in such harsh territory. I am glad you found someone who still challenges your being.. for that is life itself through living and those we know and hold dear. Love can be such torment.. and joy.. and so many things!!! Thank you for sharing... love your honesty my friend and may your heart find peace, understanding and it's own divine love! Myself I chose to end my days in peace and love even though it pains sometimes! =)

[Maya Luna]

Deep and moving. Writing is not only about what you feel but about what you'd like others to feel. Kudos!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

And that, my friend, truly is love! It's very torturous and painful. The rollercoaster ride can be so unpredictable, but I love your testament of the pleasurable pain that is love! Great pen!

"Wonder how you do it..magician surely you are
You haunted me day and night..is there no way to cut you out
How sweet everything is about you,even with the pains and aches you bring
How you play with my heart .."

[bluessadmood]

I want to reply to the friend down there,Flo_writer..
Yes you are right ,you should not experience this kind of love..leave that experience for me ha ha ,for I like it a lot..
and I always thought and will ever think love is that way..like a torture..
You are right its not a lovely poem its almost a trash but simply i just loved it..and as you say you found nothing lovely about it..its a matter of opinion for I loved it a lot..
though i never talk about what I write but this is an exception..i think this was one of the very beautiful things that
I wrote..
yes you seem to know life and love better than me!!!..I guess I have to learn a lot from you then!
I wish you could always enlighten me about the so many wrong things that I know about life an love!
since you seem very experienced and know a lot about it!
Yes your review was very enlightening and informative!!!

[Flo_writer]

This sounds like the kind of love I never want to experience. They say "pain is love" and vice versa, but I think true love is nothing but infinite and overwhelming bliss, so much so there is never any room for pain. I won't say it's a lovely poem because I don't find anything lovely about it. Instead I will say that you have captured in a more literal sense "love truly is pain"

[Sel Whiteley]

You really capture how a person can transform your life and then you will be infatuated with them forever more, they have caught you and you can't escape. It's very direct with such raw emotion, beautifully underwritten and very moving

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

No rules is the best kind of poetry, flows more from the heart and the deep sincerity of this piece is refreshing... you are better at poetry then you think.

[Helena]

Moayad, this was fantastic!! Everything a romantic poem should be!
Bitter/sweet showing the "torture of love" (loved the title!) and
yes, unfortunately love is torture sometimes, especially
unrequited love....the pain cuts deep and the wounds are very
slow healing, if ever.

I loved the last few lines especially. Just beautiful....bravo my friend!
Keep up the good work poet!!

Hugs
Helena :)

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

a lovely well written expression, i love this...you have wonderful poetry....excellent darling! x0x0x0x

[Gandré]

what a strong passionate love... I loved this. I thought this was even sad when love is platonic. "You brought a new meaning to love" -----this is what we like to hear, this being special. what a wonderful piece!

[shythatway]

Well, they do say that love is sweet torture. *smile* I think that everyone who has ever been really in love, can fully relate to what you've written in this poem. I know that I do. Thank you for sharing.