Young One

Young One

A Poem by Khaotic Katastrophe

Young one so sweet and free.

Many dreams of what to be

Young one just wait awhile

Don’t grow up as fast as you desire

Enjoy the precious years ahead of you.

Always remember

Stay true to yourself

Don’t conform to others wants.

Young one in my arms

So close to me;

I wish I could protect you forever.

To keep away all the bad dreams.

As you are young I am your dream catcher

Scaring away all of your fears.

Young one this world is cruel

Take heed in the words I say to you

Follow your dreams

Be careful who you trust.

Believe in love

Listen closely to words.

Dance around like you don’t care.

Sing as loud as you want.

Write what you feel, no matter if it sounds insane.

Don’t let anyone bring you down.

Young one as I am your dream catcher

I hope for you to be

Everything your heart desires to be.  

© 2010 Khaotic Katastrophe


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I like this. I will be really protective of my child when I am older. Especially from his or her father depending.

Posted 13 Years Ago


seems a mother wanting to protect her child...growing up is difficuilt.

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice! i don't know if you know this, but some time ago I wrote a very similar one called Beautiful Child, and believe it or not I used the same picture, and some of the words you use here are the exact same ones I used!
very nice write!
talking about a baby is always so pure and true..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Being a mother i can relate so .. and it made me cry .. we can only do our best and hope and pray our children are safe and walk the path of goodness.
This has such a nice flow and reads so well .. i love it and am saving it ..i have found so many wonderful poets and poems i have favored.. very nice
I love this

Dance around like you don’t care.

Sing as loud as you want.

That's what i say to my son when he sings and someone says be quiet .. sing as loud as you want.. beautiful poem you have written.

Peace
Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow i love it and thats soooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttttttt

so sweet

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 25, 2010
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