Sunset

Reflective thoughts ....

 

Sunset is a time for reflection …. mellow thoughts

Working out the day …. and how its run its course

Letting all the worries of your life unfold

Speaking in your mind the stories yet untold

Watching the reflections of that ball of fire

As it sets so quickly … ready to retire

Just as in our lives we reach our own twilight

Thinking of the things we’ve done … were we wrong or right?

No recriminations … no retrospective yearning

Just a time to meditate … the last process of yearning

A time to understand … what we did and why

A time to pass to others … the lessons of our time

 

 

 

Phil Sanders

Reviews

[An Ordinary Woman]

This is very similar to thoughts I having a few minutes ago minus the sunset part. In fact, I started a poem and then I decided to scrap it because I need to stay focused on my book. LOL

I agree totally, we live, we learn, (hopefully) and we give thanks for that and go on our way.
Beautiful thoughts this morning, Phil. :+)

[justjenn_2u]

Sunset - this is a poem which reflects peace of mind. A poem flowing with pure thoughts.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Lovely imagery, smooth and relaxed peice. Enjoyed this.


Great Write,
Rayne

[Ken Simm.]

Smooth writing here Phil. Reminds me of the old Moodies Album Days of Future Past. Or parts of it at least.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I like this very much...beautifully written...sentimental...