Maple Orchard

Having a go at a cinquain inspired by Lorry and Einstein Noodle. 5 lines, syllables 2/4/6/8/2, one sentence

In flame
leaves of maple
cascade from twisted limbs
to settle on fresh fallen snow's
canvas

Reviews

[Lorry]

Show off, nailing it on your first go. :)
That's why I think this format is so good, it has a visual impact on the mind instantly, no faffing about. (i totally need to say faffing more often):)
A very apt description for this time of year, almost picture postcard scene.

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Lorry. Great way of getting imagery over. Not easy though, you have to concentrate. Faffing, that's a good word. I've mentioned it again just for you :)

Chris

[Lorry]

It'll be trending next :)
Ps...i sort of know what that means, but In a not really kinda way :)

[Chris Shaw]

You have to keep up with the younger generations lingo don'tcha?

[Lorry]

I'll have you know that I am so home with the downies and stuff n that, innit? :)

[Chris Shaw]

Safe bro........

[Stephany]

Beautiful, simple and succinct.. reminding us all of the power of nature

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Stephany, I appreciate your visit.

Chris

[Ted Kniffen]

D****t, Chris, the ante has been upped. I may need to call on this one, or toss in my cards. You, Lorry & E. have written some fine bits, now I must go work on my own. I'll be back. ;0

[Chris Shaw]

Thanks Ted. Considering this is only one sentence, it took me quite a while. Not easy. Appreciate your response.

Chris