Love's Legacy

How fleeting is the comet's flare

which trails ablaze through dark night sky?

How swiftly moves our time on earth

before we part with sad goodbyes?

And in-between, what does it mean?

It all concerns the seeds we sow.

For love and love alone ensures

the worth of all we choose to grow.

Reviews

[Laz K.]

The theme of your poem is a "hobby horse" of mine. It's not only the fantasy of poets that love is the greatest force there is, but an actual reality.
The comet, its trail, and the seeds are all great metaphors. The tone of the poem is also one of its strengths - in my opinion. The quiet recognition of the brevity of life, and its acceptance are no small feats. However, we won't really disappear without a trace if we plant and grow with love.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Laz for stopping by. Appreciating your thoughts.

Chris

[Moomin]

I have read much of your work, and find your words very compelling. Yet this short piece is, in my humble opinion, your best. You captrue so much, with so few words - the hallmark of a real poet. Your works are sheer quality.

This speaks a resounding simple truth that, sadly escapes the world's frantically busy poulations.

I agree, I wholeheartedly agree.

I wsih you peace.

moomin

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Moomin, your visit and response very much appreciated. Thank you so much for your encouragement.

Chris

[Aurora]

For those who believe, I daresay aye.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Ayria. Your visit and thoughts most welcome.

Chris

[Aurora]

Aurora, a nit-pick alert. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Please forgive typos. Using my phone and the print is small :)

[Shandra Sun]

Yes. yes and yes. Love the flowing of this beautiful piece of poetry. Love is the only reality that will prevail. All the rest is a painful illusion.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks for your visit and your thoughts. Much appreciated Shandra.

Chris

[An owl on the moon]

I was realizing the other day how quickly our legacy can fade while considering the loss of both my mother and my father. And yet, in the now we find endless moments where we can love, and impact the not yet with every possible joy. Thank you for this poem that helps us keep our focus on what really matters in this life... so fleeting.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Craig for sharing your thoughts and for your visit here. Most appreciated.

Chris

[Power Knows the Truth A..]

There's so much packed in here! Stunning. Your writing leaves me feeling like I have the answer by asking myself more questions. Great work!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your visit. I truly appreciate your response. You are most welcome here.

Chris

[Weeping willow]

Lovely write and beautiful flow ;-]

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Weeping willow for your thoughts. Your visit most appreciated.

Chris

[kitty]

The seeds we sow ~ how they grow...depends on our individual take on life. For me the saying,"if you could live your life again what would you change?' I'd say emphatically - nothing! With all the ups and downs life has been good. Your poem has brought home how lucky I have been. Thank you.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear kitty, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I am so pleased that life has been good to you so far. I hope it continues to be. Your visit much appreciated.

Chris

[kitty]

You are most heartily welcome! Hope the weather stays good your side!

[Chris Shaw]

Not up to much today. Fingers crossed for tomorrow :)

[Nolo Segundo]

Short but sweet, very sweet! A little poem that gives both joy and sadness, but more joy than sadness.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Nolo. So pleased for your visit. All good wishes.

Chris

[BlackPrince]

This is a wonderful ode to love!
'For love and love alone ensures
the worth of all we choose to grow.'

Well done

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks BlackPrince for your visit. Most appreciated.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

We reap what we sow. We must plant love and leave a legacy for others to enjoy. Your wisdom is surpassing and encompassing. We grow with love and diminish with hate.
Marvelous you.

[Chris Shaw]

So good to see you here Sami. Thank you for your words of wisdom.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. Have a good day.

[Chris Shaw]

And you too :)

[Sami Khalil]

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