A Transient Blemish

A Transient Blemish

A Poem by Christine Anne Shaw
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(mind wanderings on a sleepless night)

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distant fir tree tops
create silhouette tattoos
on moon's peerless skin

© 2020 Christine Anne Shaw


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dear Chris... the Moon does appear to have tattoos...
and I can only imagine... as I view beyond the stars
through the top of fir trees what secret symbols are
embedded... perhaps angel wings and flowers praying
for our world in disarray. gently, Pat


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

Dear Pat, thank you for your lovely response. Always good to have a visit from you.

C.. read more



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Wonderful haiku here, much enjoyed this

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Christine Anne Shaw

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you my friend for your visit. Pleased you enjoyed this one.

Chris
dear Chris... the Moon does appear to have tattoos...
and I can only imagine... as I view beyond the stars
through the top of fir trees what secret symbols are
embedded... perhaps angel wings and flowers praying
for our world in disarray. gently, Pat


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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

Dear Pat, thank you for your lovely response. Always good to have a visit from you.

C.. read more
And the beauty of the distant depths ...magical indeed...🌹🌹

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Yes, beautiful to see. Thank you Kelly.

Chris
A striking and quite creative bit of imagery.
Your mind, poetess, wanders to very lovely places.

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Jimmy for your thoughtful review. All good wishes.

Chris
I really like this one. I interpret this haiku as a statement on perception. We see the moon for the trees in the way of it instead of how fair it really is

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Christopher and for sharing your thoughts. Your visits are welcome and appreciated.
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Christopher Chambers

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much for the warm welcome :)

Christopher
even the trees cant stand a black canvas:) like me with an empty sheet of paper

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Bunny. Your response set a smile on my face this early Sunday morning.

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What an extraordinary observation, Chris But, closed my eyes and saw.. absolutely.. clever.. beautiful

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emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Hope to. Long night awake.. visitors later.. snatching a kip tween times! Five chores done out of ni.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Hope your day is good.
emmajoy

1 Month Ago

Not been bad, two visitors, sitting at the required distance chit chatting, plus as we can't really.. read more
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Another fine Haiku, dear Chris. You always capture the imagery so well in the brevity of the form. Tattoos on the moon is so very original. Not that I can stand tattoos, mind you. Yuck! So well described, here. Much enjoyed! :))

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you dear Jamila. Beautiful moonlight, but yes I saw the tattoo. Our Beth is going through a ph.. read more
such a wonderful, delightful read

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your review. It means alot.

Chris
stylish, decorative meandering. love the analogy of the body ink. nice show and tell ... :)

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Christine Anne Shaw

1 Month Ago

Thank you Pete for your visit. All good wishes.

Chris

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Christine Anne Shaw
Christine Anne Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Have been at Writerscafe for a year now, so pleased I made the change to posting my work here. Have loved reading poetry all my life, but never wrote my first poem until I hit 40. I wish now that I.. more..

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