Serenity

how that Goring bridge glows gold
as the sinking sun goes down
in a blaze of burnished bright
in a world that's upsidedown

while the geese in convoy swim
upstream in the fading light
bouquets of the river banks
hide their beauty to the night

stars though find the time to shine
as the pale moon shows her face
crystal waters of the weir
drift in patterns like fine lace

Goddess Gaia you I praise
bless your gifts on doldrums days

Reviews

[Lathen Griffiths]

I love the imagery of the bridge leading off to the blazing sinking sun, it left me with a feeling of otherworldliness, reinforced by the mention of the Goddess Gaia in the final lines. Wonderful as always Chris, I hope you’re enjoying this magnificent summer.

Lathe

[Chris Shaw]

Lovely to have a visit Lathe. Thank you so much for your review. Yes, enjoying the summer, hope the same for you.

Chris

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The peace on earth of earth. The world keeps spinning around and we only hope gravity keeps our feet on solid ground. I enjoyed the soothing read.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Fabian. The river brings its peace and quiet. We all need tranquility and serenity to feed our soul.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

I take it that you were inspired to write this lovely, peaceful piece from your day out on the Thames .

You almost took me there Chris , serenity is priceless ..

[Chris Shaw]

You are so right Stella. An awe inspiring setting. Easy to pick up the pen with a painting in front of you. Thank you so much. Happy Sunday. We are still on the Thames.

Chris

[Stella Armour]

Have fun .... laugh a lot and take lovely memories home with you :)

[Ken e Bujold]

I'm new (barely a day old) but already am in love with work of so many kindred souls. Great poem Kris. Especially love the 1st verse final "in a blaze of burnished bright/in a world upsidedown". Great metaphor for reflection