WHERE AM I

Being around large crowds of people.

coming around a large crowd what do you see?

lots of people who are looking at you.

you have no idea what they are thinking.

they are looking at you as if you were from another planet or something.

apart of you feels like you are in a different planet with many people, who don't have any idea who you are or what you are about.

they look at you and judge you right away.

then you think to your self, where am i?

I don't know any of these people.

They are giving me dirty looks and think I don't belong there.

I am a person just like them, but I might be different

but I am a human like they are.

At the end you always ask yourself Where AM I

Author's Note

If they is anything that I need to add to it or change, anything like that, please let me know. Thanks

Reviews

[jeannemarie coulter]

this poem created a clear snapshot of a situation we often find ourselves in...well done...

[Justin]

thanks :) :) i agree with you :)

[WordShaker33]

So beautiful and powerful. I feel that way all the time, thank you for sharing!

[Justin]

your welcome, thanks for reading it :)

[Priscilla Sousa]

this is beautiful! I feel like this lots of time... thank you for writing this!

[Justin]

thanks :) your welcome, it sucks but that is life :)

[Lea Walker]

This is a very relatable poem. It makes you feel alone and hopeless. Which means you've done an excellent job writing it.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) i wanted to capture emotions of the reader

[Lea Walker]

You sure succeeded

[Elisa]

I totally understand how you feel. Like I said before, some people are just so inconsiderate, especially to people who are different, and especially in large crowds where mob mentality runs rampid. Good job on this. It's so honest.

[Justin]

thanks :) :) it is the truth once you get in large crowds you have no idea where you are

[Heartful5160]

Great it really connects with what we were talking about! I really did like it, because I could connect with it very much so. I think everyone at some point in their lives has a time where they don't feel like they belong anywhere. I know I have and it really does feel weird, but I just think to myself, where just alike, we just have to get to know one another! And that's what you do and from there you'll start to feel like you finally belong! Great write, my friend! Keep writing!

[Justin]

thanks :) it is awesome that we do have something in common, that you were able to connect with it :)

[Heartful5160]

I love that I can do that with other peoples writing! And your welcome! It is great to have something in common with you too! I love meeting new people and to know that we could have something in common!

[Justin]

me too, on this site we all have something in common, we enjoy the art of writing

[Heartful5160]

Exactly and in that writing hopefully people can in some way connect with it!

[MandaBear]

Great poem =) I would rather be different than part of the crowd anyway. Different people make the world much more interesting =)

[Justin]

thanks :) i agree with you, being different is awesome :)