The Prayer

I close my eyes and pray to God

Hoping that He hears my cries

Demons have tried to bring me down

I wont give in to all their tries

 

Help me push these demons away

They are trying to steal my lonely soul

Everyday they mysteriously appear

Dancing toward hell with lives they’ve stole

 

My faith is strong, cannot be broken

I know you’re always by my side

I wont give in to sinful temptations

I cannot hand these demons my life

 

So I close my eyes and pray to God

Hoping that He hears my plea

That if tomorrow I do not wake

Find my soul and set me free

 

Author's Note

Please review and comment :)

Reviews

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

Aaron that was very good! Just to tell you something. God is always here for you. He knows you need him before you pray... He can read our minds. He is our Father & he knows when we are in pain or just really lonely. He might not talk to you one on one. But he does answer you... It might be in a dream or something happens that will help you make the right choses. I know this is coming from a 15 year old. But alot has happened in my life in the last 7 years... I know how it feels to be lonley, afraid, and down right depressed.... Aaron I wish you the best in your life.. Stay strong & keep your eyes open for God's answers.... It might happen a few years from now... But i know something goods gonna come out of this! ♥

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much.... I know He hears my prayers and my words :) Thank you

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

No problem!!! ♥ I'm always here to share the word of God... Thats my duty..lol

[sinNsincerity]

Great write man, we can all give in to temptation so easily and to keep our faith as an every day battle.
Keep you faith!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much.... lots of sinful temptation out there gotta stay strong.

[Leena Madhuri]

great!!! I love it! beautiful Aaron!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Leena.... I appreciate your compliments very much :)

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Faith and Hope live in these lines penned by one not afraid to lean on his Creator. A nice write Aaron.

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you for very much! He inspired me to write this piece last night and I am glad you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime all we have is hope and a prayer.
"So I close my eyes and pray to God
Hoping that He hears my plea
That if tomorrow I do not wake
Find my soul and set me free"
I like the strength and positive feel of the words. Prayers make us feel closer to God. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much for the review. Prayers do make us feel closer to God and in this crazy world we live in we need that close relationship. Thank you for your kind words Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.

[nazia]

God is the ultimate preserver of mankind.. an amazing write.. I liked everything from the topic to the form the rhymes and the closing lines.. Great work Aaron :)

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Nazia! Your kind words are much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed it :)

[armin]

Good work Aaron, I liked the flow and rhymes .
Description is very fine.
All over a good piece of poetry.

armin. ...

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much Armin..... glad you liked it!

[Jamestown]

Unbelievable brother, absolutely fantastic!
Praise Jesus!!!
You know this is my favorite from you and
definitely headed to my library favorites!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you very much James.... that means a lot! I am glad you enjoyed it... thank you!