ISOLATION

Co-written with the amazing JiDonnelly!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

How could something so magic
a feeling so immense
dramatically turn tragic
awkward and intense?

 

How the seasons turned so cold

a heartbreaking scene

unraveling to fool’s gold

solitary and unforeseen…

You never will fully realize
how much you inspired me
practically perfect in my eyes
all I ever desired to be…

 

Moving ahead in silence now

how fragments are all I see

a haunting empty vow

adrift on a frozen sea…

Author's Note

Please stop by Jidonnelly’s page here at the Cafe. What a wonderful poet! http://www.writerscafe.org/JiDonnelly

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Excellent combining of talents... sometimes love just isn't enough and being apart is the best way to love one another.

[Craba]

enjoyed this collab it's beautifully written.
Wonderful mix of inkings....

[Tate Morgan]

this mixture of melody and fantasy written in your impeccable ability to tell a emotional tale make for a beautiful ride.Of course the rhyme meter and content appeal most to me i like snippets of quatrains i function better reading rythme and melody in separate thoughts so 100 for you as I always do

[Marie]

Something of an analogy...autumn to winter...lovely...

[Emberlorna]

This is so tragic & beautiful. The last four lines were breathtaking. I loved it :}

[Suze]

Wonderful poem, heartfelt and raw with emotion.

[That1Nerd23]

Perfection. Marvelous perfection! Bravo, bravo!

[Pax]

So much sadness beautifully written. A haunting love that will forever be In frozen very well kept... A great collab.

[Horizon K.]

What a beautiful collaboration! Heartbreaking & haunting. I'm wondering who wrote what parts?

[rnuff]

So very well written, Awesome collab,
Love the rhythm and rhyme, awesome creativity.