DOES SHE?

DOES SHE?

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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A page from my diary�

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Does she know…

no sea, no sky is more extravagant

then the soft curves of her smile?

Fennel toothpaste…

 

Does she see…

that I would give all I possess in exchange

for her and consider myself wealthy?

Reflections…

 

Does she feel…

my heart race when she’s near me

aching for her; longing with all I am?

Her giant…

 

Does she sense…

that the only thing I fear in all the world

is losing her, living without her dear love?

Together…

 

Does she realize…

I think of her with my every breath

sighing her sweet name as I exhale?

Basil and thyme…

 

Does she?

 

© 2009 An owl on the moon


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Great photo of you BTW :-) I enjoyed the format of this passionate tribute to your love. I usually don't assume that a poem is written through the eyes of the poet, but since your picture accompanies the piece, I feel safe in my assumption. Or perhaps you are imagining the way you would love that special someone when she enters your life. Either way, The verse is warm, creative and exceptional as always, Craig. Ending is perfect, and I really enjoy the last stanza....basil and thyme...quite nice....

Posted 10 Years Ago


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so so romantic and beautiful to read ... and to think of someone loving someone with such passion yet asking, does she know ? she knows
basil and thyme .. love that.
peace
Chloe

Posted 9 Years Ago


I read this again and I love it still.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very nice poetry. It just flows so sweetly, with a touch of longing. A very lucky lady indeed warrents this piece. I like the use of spices in the descriptions. It adds something that fits, but something different.

Posted 9 Years Ago


so sincere and sweet. it's simple, yet incredibly detailed. i really enjoyed reading this. amazing job, as usual.

Posted 10 Years Ago


So completley romantic and breath taking, I liked the rhythme, is there a name for this kind of poem? Love it simply amazing! n.n

Posted 10 Years Ago


I too often try to make love into a grandiose thing, with my five-syllable, twelve-letter words. That's my loss, as love need not be more elegant than the taste of her saliva in the morning, or the smell of her shampoo at night. These you have captured magnificently. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think that whoever she is she's lucky for having someone to love her so. She surely knows if now she probably does now, I hope. thank you for sharing a piece of yourself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is so beuatiful and so amazing,
Such a wonderful write here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this alot a very deep and sincere piece... very heartfelt.... overall great job on this!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay this was intense and romantic and beautiful. This is a how to feel about you woman manual. lol


Great poem.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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2018 was a journey through my poetic novel, An Owl on the Moon. 2019 will find me going back to a deep inspiration for me... Wonderland... The night has a thousand eyes, And the day but one; .. more..

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