The sun is jealous

Based on a true story... or so says I...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ì Hush golden sun is jealous of your smile     

Burns muted hot in your warmth for awhile…

 

Ì And wild ocean steals color from your eyes

In your stirring shadows, the blue waves rise…

 

Ì How the whistling wind whispers your name

Haunts deeping forests, dances blossoming plains…

 

Ì Each step you take caressingly skates the earth

Startling stones of fire lust quiver in untamed mirth…

 

Ì Thunderous chants in emotions of earth and isles

Hushed golden sun is so jealous of your smile…

 

Reviews

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well Craig you have done it again. You must be a romantic.
This is so romantic and just flows so easily.
Makes me imagine a man telling this to his woman as she lays there with her eyes closed. gosh
wow great poem
Thanks for sharing with me
Look forward to the next

[Alicante lullaby]

beautiful...you truely are a poet of romance...nice...

[emmajoy]

What a truly beautiful poem, Craig .. but then, beautiful words come so frequently from your pen. Love the ' How the whistling wind whispers your name ~ Haunts deeping forests, dances blossoming plains … '

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. ah, beautiful ... you shine like the sun with this one, craig ... all the way ... and how remarkably well you present your words ... whoever this is for is indeed luckier than the sun ... so you say and explain why ... and you own with words ... your own sky ... ravishing poetry ... lovable and lovingly written ...

[Cafe Reader]

Very intense!

[the in between]

This gave me goosebumps and chills, but because it was so lovely. :) thank you for sharing this.

[Robin]

saturated in color and emotional images ~ intense

[Lydia Blackwell]

oh my.... I am almost jealous of this woman who enraptures you!!! You have a lovely way with the english language! I love your poetry. it gets better all the time!

[Tony]

Yeees, the whole world revolves around and adds to the depth of our loved ones. Glorious!

[YouoweYoupay]

I could never think of more beautiful, deeply enchanting words to describe someone I love. I liked how the images slipped through my imagination. Nicely fitting picture and title. *thumbs up* Thanks, Craig.