Regret

Regret

By Charles D. Moorer

 

Karma is dynamic,

not like dice thrown.

It is what goes around

Vengance is not mine,

mine that it would be

I want revenge...

strive for balance

I wish,

I wish I could love again.

Karma is fixed,

not like dice thrown.

I wish,

I wish I never met you.

 

Reviews

[cest la vie]

Excellent poem ..
Revenge seems to be the answer for rejection for so many people. I too used to have that mindset. However, I see past pain as a wonderful lesson and compass for my future. Another finely written piece her. Yes, I like this very much!!

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Got the feeling this love didn't work out. Yes vengence is not ours, but sweet revenge when what goes around comes around. Nice.

[David Lewis Paget]

It's hard to contain those negative feelings sometimes, though Karma does operate, and perhaps we should leave it to its own devices. Revenge is a human frailty and only damages ourselves - or so we tell ourselves. But true, how many of us have thought - I wish I'd never met you! Perhaps that's the only way we feel we can deal with the pain? Short, sharp and to the point.

[☮]

Wow. This stings. I've felt this way before. Nice write... short, but full of substance. Nice write, C.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Thanks for asking me to stop by and read this one. You wrote this one? Or is this one of your brother's pieces...
I have not heard from you, you have not stopped by in a while....just wanted to send a hello your way as well.

Cheers,lea