My Lord, My Life

My Lord, My Life

A Poem by Chelsea
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My walk with Christ.

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My Lord, My Life

I lay on the ground

My heart shattered in pieces

I cry out in pain knowing I can’t go on

You come and break the chains off that were knocking me down

You pick the pieces of my heart and put them together

I feel your presence

All my worries are gone

I feel light, as if a gust of wind could carry me

The dark no longer lifts me,

The light lifts me

I’m a new person in Christ


Best Christian Poem ~ My Lord, My Life by Chelsea

Dec 10, 2010


© 2011 Chelsea


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Chelsea
A poem about my love for the Lord, 100% true. Reviews appreciated :)

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amen to that! when you write about your personal experiancses, hard as it may be, it comes alive and gives much stronger meaning. another good write! would like to see more of it :) dont be afraid to let go and be completely honest in your poetry, that's what it is here for. open your heart to ways of expressing yourself more. i really hope i didnt insult you by saying that. but i see lots of potential with you, as your poems are good, but i believe you can make them better. :)
i hope that helps and i havnt annoyed you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love how you seen the dark side and back into the light with Jesus Christ your poem is a true blessing to the soul my soul.

Posted 5 Years Ago


You did an amazing job!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amen keep speaking the truth through your poetry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amen! Nice! Very Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! I am a Christian too and I really needed to read this right now too great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There are many times in my life where I have prayed deeply and felt the calming peace afterward.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really sweet and strong!

Posted 9 Years Ago


A beautiful and positive poem. Most of us learn to appreciate God when we are at our worst. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your faith makes mine stronger! You have demonstrated so aptly that all things are survivable with the Lord by your side. A fabulous write, Chelsea!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent and worthy Christian values are recognised in this concise (but sincere) poem - from the heart! Clearly, it appears that this writer has been re-born in Christ! If other readers of this piece are also Christians, it would probably be good to share it amongst others who share our faith? Thankyou, for sharing this and declaring your real-life "walk with Christ"!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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