Petal by Petal

Picking the flower apart, petal by petal.

Petal by Petal

Picking a flower from a patch

Yanking its stem from the ground; until it breaks free

Pulling it to bits; petal by petal

He loves me, he loves me not

Petals scattered around my feet

Flower choosing my destiny

Author's Note

Ah yes another sappy poem. Don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this. So it made for quite the strange poem :)
Please review.
(Just to let you know this picture is NOT mine!)

Reviews

[Kate Hunter]

cute. good job.

[hannajade]

haha lol . i like it, very cute poem!!

[Marie Harrison]

So cute. I love it!

[Sarah Jane]

I love this, I think we've all picked a flower petal by petal. I know I have. I love the way you write, simple, to the point, but very beautiful

[*skittlez*]

k poetgirl but i kinds like this poem

[Periac]

i dont think its at all sapping...its a great short piece that screams for the reader "hey!!! here is your puzzle!!" soft and eccentric....well laid out

[Goodbye]

It is very cutesy but in a nice way. Good Job!

[thoughts of jade]

its not sappy...actually its a beautiful one

[clauds294]

Haha reminds me of me when I would do that all the time, poor flowers :/ Nice work

[Nothing Personal]

A lot of people actually do that. This is a old romance movie cliche and maybe something which people mock these days...Interesting you wrote...