chapter one

         Ok,ok. I know what I previously said doesn't make sense. So let me back up a little. It all started when I moved to a little  town I like to call madison.

        I was perfectly happy in my old town of benton but no my mom had to remarry and make us move. So here I am in madison hating my life. Thats when I saw him. He was the most perfect boy I had ever laid my eyes on. Short black hair and kinda muscular. His eyes made me feel like I was swimming in two crystal clear pools of water.       I first noticed him in the cafeteria. The way he walked with such gracefullness and the way he laughed with his friends. After that I was like silly putty in his hand. After lunch I had science with him and quicly learned his name was Jordan. We ended up paired together on a science project.      Jordan was the first one to speak. He looked down at me and smiled and said "Hello, whats your name?" in the most graceful voice I have ever heard.

 

Author's Note

I haven't got to the fantasy part yet

Reviews

[nostal]

Good so far, just some grammatical errors, but i don't think this has been edited yet, so whatever.