Feelings

my feelings are very fragile

   Feelings are fragile things,
   easy to hurt,
   easy to crush,
   change in the blink of an eye

   My feelings are hurt,
   It's not your fault
   that I was stupid
   I'll be smarter

   Please don't hurt me,
   I like you,
   but your taken
   I hope she loves you



  

Author's Note

I wrote this last night when I was going through a very emotional time

Reviews

[Turambar]

Nice poem, hits the nail on the head when it comes to loving someone who you can't have,
'' i like you,
but your taken
I hope she loves you''

That feeling of hurt but at the same time the love we have making us want them to be happy and to be treated right, the selflessness that no else appreciates.

This poem perfectly describes how we can feel happy and overjoyed at potential love one minute and then be crushed and in the gutter over the slightest thing said or done
'' Feelings are fragile things,
easy to hurt,
easy to crush,
change in the blink of an eye''

Sums it up nicely

[Tapher]

i like this one, ite very pretty, great work. :) sorry your going through alot

[khalid]

very hard to feel that the one we love in intrested in another one..this is the worst we can feel...very nicely written

[Bare trees]

Very sad, It's good to be able to get your thoughts down on the page. Hope you feel better.

[Kaylor Mason]

Ouch . . . that feeling always feels like ice through the chest. I do believe people can die of a broken heart. I really do

[StephanieDenise]

love itt! can't wait to read your other things!(:

[Alex Vidmar]

This is great Cheyanne. Love it.