Razor Witch

A bloody witch poem.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Razor Witch

Come here my sweet!

Come to my house

To trick or treat,

Nothing will beat

What I have to eat.

 

My face is rather green

But I’m nice to meet.

My nose is very crooked,

But my black teeth

Will widely greet.

 

If you are nice boys and girls

I’ll give you poison or

Candy full of

Razors to eat!

 

So scoot your

Feet over here

And come trick or treat

On my side of the street.

I’ll make your gums bleed

For Halloween, my Sweet!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Arthur Crow]

Thoroughly enjoyed this spill of chilling witchery… loved the mood and descriptions. The title is perfect!

[Tate Morgan]

cute

[Cynthia]

Do you write these for halloween!?
It's a great spooky write!

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Nicely timed and themed.

[Fran Marie]

Sweets for the sweetest~ Nice spooky fright write for the season

Well DonE!!

[Eric Cox]

This is cool. Great write for Halloween. Spooky and humorous. Cool pen on this.

[Oswell Thatinswell]

I like this poem a lot. The rhythm seems kinda off to me at some times. But on the whole, it was an awesome poem

[Tina Kline]

I love this, is creepy and amusing at the same time. I could just hear the wicked witches voice from the Wizard Of Oz as I read this!

[nono]

haha scary!!!! lol This is a nice write for Halloween!! Melt the witch lol I loved that movie! :D

[M Garcia]

Great write Marie!