Forever Damned

A blood splatter

Forever Damned

Traces of your heart

Brand my soul tonight

Like a dagger

Driven deep below

Gasping for air to breath

As blood runs down my neck

One bite and

I was eternally forsaken

Forever damned

Reviews

[TonyJay]

I felt like i was reading my own suicide note. It was great and chilling.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

So short, but an AMAZING write...
Extremely well done!

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

A great masterpiece...

[M Garcia]

Great work. One bite is definitely all it takes. My thought, forever damned is to be forever saved. Well in some cases. Thanks for sharing and keep writing!

[?]

Thats all it takes is one bite.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Lovely lines very much impressed...

[JanieB]

Well written.

[Linear]

Damn :0()

[Jupiter Jazz]

Made me think of True Blood and Hellsing. Very sensual goth.
That's how I always imagined I'd feel if I were made into a blood sucker. Forsaken and Damned.... and extremely pissed off =)



FYI: Line 5, I think you meant breathe.