Forever Damned

A blood splatter

Forever Damned

Traces of your heart

Brand my soul tonight

Like a dagger

Driven deep below

Gasping for air to breath

As blood runs down my neck

One bite and

I was eternally forsaken

Forever damned

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

LOL...don't tell me another vampire poem...awesome. It is good not overdone like most, you leave imagination for the readers eye. I only say that because I read 3 so far today...it must be vampire day lol

[Becky C Strukamp]

WOW, what a powerful poem. Excellent!!!

Traces of your heart brand my soul tonight.

Love that line. You did a magnificent job here!!

[Tasha]

I loved this, I don't even know why.. just an amazing write.
♥ Ta'Shandra