Forever Damned

A blood splatter

Forever Damned

Traces of your heart

Brand my soul tonight

Like a dagger

Driven deep below

Gasping for air to breath

As blood runs down my neck

One bite and

I was eternally forsaken

Forever damned

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Romantic Gothic Horror.
Gave me chills.

[Thea]

Few words with such powerful idea...Excellent... :)))

[Chris]

A good vampyre beginning...

Chris

[sugar]

wow ok soo like beautiful but like deadly and painfull...you do have a way with words....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Eternal love has a price... makes me want to watch Queen Of The Damned.

[Darkest Rose]

Love this! Very powerful! Wording is amazing! 'One bite and I was eternally forsaken.' Amazing line. :)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the punch in this poem!

[tynamite]

I love this one. It's very sharp and direct, like maybe being a vampire is.

[Tina Kline]

I love this! A really good vampire poem.

[Jibey]

Raw and painful..