Voodoo Lady

"Voodoo Lady"

There's a Voodoo Doll
Held captive by a Voodoo Lady
Bound by a Voodoo spell
Its mind is Voodoo crazy

She holds it firmly in her hands
While laying it in a Voodoo Lily lined bed
As the Witching Hour draws near
She paints it Lipstick Red

The Sorceress works her magic
From its head to its toes
Causing an involuntary reaction
As the Voodoo Doll explodes

Then while still on fire
The Voodoo Doll's mind still crazy
Throws the Sorceress down onto the bed
And devours the Voodoo Lady!

:)~

Author's Note

Get your mind out of the gutter...jeez!!!

Reviews

[keepwritingkate]

This is awesome! I love poems like this where there is a tiny twist at the end. Haven't ever read a poem with a voodoo theme I enjoyed it! :D

[Chris Micha]

Haha well thank you Kate. Being from the South it's kind of rooted in culture down here. I really apoeciate it! ;)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I think some would call it trickery:)....be careful with them voodoo women...they come back to life ya know :P

[Chris Micha]

I hope they do! ;)

[Mary Ochoa]

Such an interesting write! Your note didn't quit help haha Very nice work Christian! Creative write! :)

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Mary. I really appreciate it!

[Baby Ricochet]

WHo do that voodoo that you do lil boo

[Chris Micha]

Lol dude you are something else haha

[Coyote Poetry]

Best to leave the "Voodoo Lady" alone. Being made into a doll mean you will know more pain than pleasure. I like the story in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Micha]

You speak the truth...she's bad news! Thanks Coyote!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. You are a talented writer. Please send me read request.

[Chris Micha]

I'm honored and you as well!

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was pretty interesting. I love reading creative pieces. A very well written piece. Xo Winter

[Chris Micha]

I am honored Winter! ;)

[Madalyn Beck]

Love the voodoo you've described here! I'd be game for that any day! Hahaha! I really enjoyed this one! Fantastic, Christian! xo (:

[Chris Micha]

Thank you Madalyn. Glad you stopped by! :)

[Rose Black]

Loved it... Loved the Voodoo =D

[Chris Micha]

Thank you so much Rose! A little voodoo never hurt anyone :)

[Rose Black]

Exept if you are in the receving end of a revengefull woman... you know the saying ... Hell has no fury like a woman scorned

[Chris Micha]

This is true!

[Jenny Oleinik]

This is really great, I totally enjoyed this ! :D

[Chris Micha]

Thanks so much Jenny :)

[Jenny Oleinik]

You are very welcome! Keep it up c:

[MsJewel]

You have a wonderfully twisted sense of humor! Thanks for the smile this morning.

:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Awe you're so welcome! Glad I could help. ;)