Voodoo Lady

"Voodoo Lady"

There's a Voodoo Doll
Held captive by a Voodoo Lady
Bound by a Voodoo spell
Its mind is Voodoo crazy

She holds it firmly in her hands
While laying it in a Voodoo Lily lined bed
As the Witching Hour draws near
She paints it Lipstick Red

The Sorceress works her magic
From its head to its toes
Causing an involuntary reaction
As the Voodoo Doll explodes

Then while still on fire
The Voodoo Doll's mind still crazy
Throws the Sorceress down onto the bed
And devours the Voodoo Lady!

:)~

Author's Note

Get your mind out of the gutter...jeez!!!

Reviews

[lissalovesyou]

Ooh...I like it! The first stanza reminds me of a song; maybe it's because of the "Voodoo" repetition. But this is a great little piece, just one typo:

"The Socerer works her magic" change to "The Sorcerer" or since she's a lady, "The Sorceress" ?

Overall, great job!

[Chris Micha]

That should make more sense now lol. Thank you Lisa!!! :)

[melissa]

This is a great poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them