Love, Your Secret Admirer.

Love, Your Secret Admirer.

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

My Love, 

I want you to know that when I'm
thinking of you it makes
my heart start to race

When I'm thinking of you it makes
my hands start to shake

When thinking of your smile 
it makes me blush

When I'm thinking of you talking to me
it makes me giggle nervously

When I'm thinking of how you say my name 
sends chills down my spine.

When I'm thinking of when I'll see you again 
makes me excited.

When I'm thinking of your eyes
it makes me want stare into them forever

Right now when I'm thinking of you 
it makes this hard to write

When thinking of you 
it's painful to know that you probably don't even know who I am. 

I pass you through the halls and never did you glance at me. 

I get the courage to talk to you, but you are with another girl
who is prettier than me...

But, I just want to say that I can't stop thinking of you. 

I never thought this could happen to a nobody like me, but
I know now that...

I LOVE YOU! 

You may crumble this letter and think this is a joke.
But its not.
To spare my pain
I wouldn't tell you who I am.
But I leave you with this


When I'm thinking of you I just hope you never forget me...

-Love,
your Secret Admirer

© 2012 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
A letter to my secret crush!! <3

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I thought to be incredibly sweet from the beginning down to middle, then a sudden sadness through the end. It'd be sad if he wouldn't know your true feelings and incredibly painful to see the person you love with another.

This was a very beautiful piece, a good job! Good luck with this crush of yours!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^



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Wow. It touched my heart. I have no more words to say how heart touching this is.

Posted 5 Years Ago


omg i really like this. i love one sided love stories because i know im not alone and i can relate. really well done on this piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sooo good, just the type i wanted to write, got some inspiration, now my time for experitmentation. :-),
All in all, excellent portrayl of feelings.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Aww so sweet. There were a few mistakes but other then that I enjoyed ur writing. The title really grabbed my attention as I was looking for who was online so I can check out their writing and u just so happened to be one of them that grabbed my attention with ur username

Posted 9 Years Ago


Angelic_Dreamer

9 Years Ago

lol I should check out more of your writing to see more of ur good writing
The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

You should! ;) lol And I'll check out your writings :)
Angelic_Dreamer

9 Years Ago

ok:)
woow - thats beautiful , sweet and tugging...... i know how it feels to want to make a lasting impression on someone you admire, and how it feels when you want that person to notice you - ive been a secret admirer too... many times :P

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
That's really sweet! I bet he really wants to know who you are now!

Posted 9 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
I love this so much!! Very lovely and sweet write, friend. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! ^-^
awww! This ias so beautiful and sweet, yet sad... did you really send it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

no...:( I want to, but I'm too scared too. But thanks for reading!!! :D
Lina Grey

10 Years Ago

ahah I know that feeling. I wrote a love letter in sixth grade to a guy a had the biggest crush on, .. read more
Thats soooo cute!!!! and I can so relate to this...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! :D
Aw... :( It's sweet and sad at the same time.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

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