My Battle.

I'm back

can't you feel it?

I'm in the air

 waiting, watching, preparing for..

 ..the solution for my pain

I got rid of it once

but it keeps coming back

haunting me

he asking me for more..

 ..pain

I enjoy it

I feed on it

I prey on her

can't you see that she's weak

ready to fall

only thing I have to say is..

 ..shut up

shut up

I don't want to hear your lies

I don't need these lies

 

you're ugly

I'm beautiful

 

you're nothing

I have worth

 

unloved

I am loved by God 

nobody cares for you

I have family and friends

 

it can all go away with just a single cut

you must go away

 

My name is insecurity

 

insecurity. you mean nothing to me

because I  lived it, I fought it, and in the end

I will defeat it  as many times as I have too.

Author's Note

Black: insecurity
Pink: Is me.
What do you think?

Reviews

[Astrid Wanye]

Very emotional and sad but beautiful :) Feel the same way when it comes to insecurity! Awesome job!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

[Tony]

"I will defeat it as many times as I have to."

Indeed, and that's how we grow-- this write really highlights the struggle of inner conflict and perserverance:) Magnigique!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!! ^-^

[CreativeCookie]

Great as usual, you've done it again.
Love,
CreativeCookie

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks Cookie!! :)

[Westminster Abbey]

Wow. I think what makes this poem so great is it's relatability. Almost every teenage girl has fought insecurity or is fighting it right now. This poem expresses the feelings felt during that perfectly. 100/100

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[Edward]

A very chilling piece. It chilled me to the core. You are strong and you have fought it. Don't let it get the best of you :) great job my friend!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading! ^-^

[teardrop]

very powerful read & quite emotional.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading ^-^

[Horizon K.]

Wow that really gave me chills. The passion brought to this battle tells me you will definitely win this fight. Every pink word was spoken with truth. Profound.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks for reading!!! :)

[Anna]

I think this is powerful, definitely it shows how much evolvement a person can have after dealing with so much pain for so long. I admire your writing skills and I really think you have a pure form of poetry. Stay strong all night long.

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[Felicity's Eve]

You are a very strong girl and am proud to call you my friend (if that's what we are) ^_^

This a compelling write. Very powerful and contains a message that I deeply wish more people would take to heart. :)

100/100

[The Invisible Girl]

We are friends! :) Thanks for reading!

[Felicity's Eve]

Yay! :D
And no problem ^_^

[The Invisible Girl]

^-^